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NO MORE!!!
Contributed by
angelface
on
Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 12:09:05 PM in AEST
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Cant hear your cry’s any longer
Its like they got farther and farther away till they vanished
I want to see your face once more
No i need to see your face once more
I cant take it anymore
The nightmares have to stop
The day dreams end here
Because you are making me crazy
I think about you day and night
and in between ...
But i cant help it your
Smile
Laugh
Eyes
NO!! Here i go again
i cant do this to my self
i just cant
you cant do this to me
this is the end for good now
the end...
Yea thats it the end.. Its over
but the day you put that gun to your head it was over
now that i think about it
you are to blame
or is it me
not being there sooner
i should of listen to my heart
not you
you said you are fine
you would call me later
i never go that call
how i long for that call
just your voice for one moment
thast all i need
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2004-03-01 12:09:05]
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Re: NO MORE!!!
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by arden on
Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 12:47:21 PM AEST
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not bad not bad, theres a few typos but no biggie we all have those. i liked this really good i look forward to more.
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Re: NO MORE!!!
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by a_bear on
Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 01:57:07 PM AEST
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| The depth of feeling was all I saw...the pain, you made me feel it myself...really good job. I just sold a piece of work for someone whose husband killed himself a year ago...it was a very hard poem to write..trying to put myself in her place and feel what she feels...I hope your heart heals soon... |
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Re: NO MORE!!!
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by doug on
Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 03:54:52 PM AEST
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ive been on both sides of the coin . ive seen my uncle kill himself and i almost suceeded in killing myself. its not your fault , ill say that,
though i know it does little or nothing to heal your pain. i hope the dreams of him stop haunting you so you can finally feel happiness again. i can never understand your pain because each person experiances a unique version of pain. however my experiance gives me a little understanding. i sincerely hope that youcan leave this behindyou and find happiness. your friend doug |
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Re: NO MORE!!!
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by uchendu on
Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 12:19:11 PM AEST
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| Sweet good write-up friend... you have a unique style i admire and this is a winner any day.. get on doing it friend |
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