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Trapped
Contributed by
mysg63
on
Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 11:01:49 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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Trapped within my world
Trapped within my heart
My misery is increasing
My soul being ripped apart
Cannot escape this prison
Wish they'd let me go
The chains are preventing me
And my hope is running low
Trapped within my body
Trapped within my mind
I want to be free
To soar the open skies
Screaming doesn't help
There is no one who can hear
All looks lost now
My fate is coming near
There is nothing left to gain
But the acceptance of death
All my memories will be with me
When I take my final breath
Written way back in March of 2003
Copyright ©
mysg63
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2004-03-01 11:01:49]
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Re: Trapped
(User Rating: 1 )
by desire on
Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 12:01:25 PM AEST
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| what can i say, it is a powerful poem filled with emotions...we all go through things and putting them down helps...peace of mind is always some where waiting to be found...a great write....slr |
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Re: Trapped
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by fallensilence on
Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 12:24:36 PM AEST
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| very raw and emotional. i thought it was a good write. -david |
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