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Distant Echoes
Contributed by
Lone_er
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Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 09:11:14 AM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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Distant Echoes
While the crescendos of our love are fading
Into echoes our hearts will always hear
And the joys of our friendship
Seem anything but near
While our hearts try their best
To become accustomed to loneliness at night
I can’t help but remember
The one who made everything all right
Four years you were always there
To uplift my often weary soul
And no matter what might transpire
Into you’re your loving arms I could go
I fancied myself a strong man
Only to discover I’m wretched and weak
Thought my heart a mighty lion
Only to find it’s sad and meek
Indeed I am only half a man
Whose life has no meaning now at all
Whose only consolation comes
When her distant echoes seem to call
Russ
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Lone_er
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2004-03-01 09:11:14]
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Re: Distant Echoes
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by desireemiote on
Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 10:14:26 AM AEST
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Sounds like something that a lot of guys fear. Not only that but once confronted by that fear would not want to admit. You seem to have given way to both. Hope all goes well...
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Re: Distant Echoes
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by Kie on
Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 10:21:54 AM AEST
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| Your poem struck a chord inside of me. My heart hurts too. You wrote a magnificient poem. You are very talented Russ and I hope sunshine comes into your life very soon. Kie |
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Re: Distant Echoes
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by Rakerman1999 on
Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 11:52:42 AM AEST
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Ouch.......this one burned its way right into my soul. I know this pain.
Very well done
Larry |
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Re: Distant Echoes
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by shelby on
Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 02:16:55 PM AEST
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deeply touching write such emotions your work is incredible
michelle |
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Re: Distant Echoes
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 04:38:23 PM AEST
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Deeply touching.....
Know that I wish only the best for you...always....
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: Distant Echoes
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 08:10:59 PM AEST
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| dearest russ, this poem is so lovely, im sitting here reading it over and over, wondering is the man who once meant so much to me thinking as he sits these things in this poem, amazing expression, im so captivated............ also i hope you have a warm smile on your face and a poem in your heart my friend, hang in there, hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Distant Echoes
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by DreamWeaver on
Tuesday, 2nd March 2004 @ 05:40:31 AM AEST
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| Heartfelt words, that fill me with sadness ... I wish you all the best in life ... Jan |
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