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Transgress Reality
Contributed by
forever_lonely
on
Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 09:01:25 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Walk upon the clouds divine
Speak of thoughts so malign
Run within a meadow fresh
Open wounds and eat the flesh
Sing with god, a serenade
Be the devil, a masquerade
Swim in blood, drown in fear
Go beyond the last frontier
Sit inside your mind confined
Be the plague to kill mankind
Fight of orc and dragons true
Speak of subjects so taboo
Reality is the key to be
To live your life and be free
But illusions are where dreams will win
So close your eyes and lets begin
Speak of subjects so taboo
Imprint your dreams in tattoo
Open your mind, let it progress
Watch yourself as your transgress
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forever_lonely
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Re: Transgress Reality
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by Vitreous_Soul on
Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 09:19:48 AM AEST
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Y'know, I had this nice little comment I was going to write, but instead, i'm just going to say this: can I steal this and put my name on it? lol
Luke, you have really ascended among the elite poets of YPDC. Keep it up, the sky's the limit for you, my friend.
Truly,
-V.S. |
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Re: Transgress Reality
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by EternitysLyre on
Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 09:21:19 AM AEST
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Pretty. Transcendentally captivating. In short, a darn good use of words and much better rhymes than I've come up with in a long time.
Laudably done.
“Serene between the waking pause; all the world’s without a cause.”
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Re: Transgress Reality
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by Rakerman1999 on
Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 09:31:18 AM AEST
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You can just flat out write Luke. Thats the bottom line. Imagination , flow and perfect rhyme every time.
Very well done
Larry |
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Re: Transgress Reality
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by arden on
Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 11:51:17 AM AEST
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that was so cool. great wording. wonderful write. so good keep it up.
Arden |
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Re: Transgress Reality
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by Kie on
Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 05:42:50 PM AEST
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| An incredible poem and a joy to read. I love your poems Luke. Kie |
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Re: Transgress Reality
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 08:03:46 PM AEST
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| dearest luke! so beautiful!! a breathing excellent poem! wow wow:) hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Transgress Reality
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by DreamWeaver on
Tuesday, 2nd March 2004 @ 05:45:22 AM AEST
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| Totally captivating ... a brilliant write ... Jan |
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Re: Transgress Reality
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by Deleterious_Dislike on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 06:15:16 PM AEST
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I can say the same about this.
Again very good structure, very good wording.
The flow is nice on the tongue. |
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