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TO HAVE YOUR LUV
Contributed by
emystar
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Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 03:15:58 AM in AEST
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Silent luv comes strolling along
from time to time.
A thought, touch or memory
that's yours and mine.
This secret desire in my soul
gets stronger day by day.
If only the devotion you hold
would come my way to stay.
To have your luv to call my own
would be my desire.
To have your luv, always true
kindling this ragging fire.
To have your luv each day
would free my soul.
To have your luv burning
so gently out of control.
Winter's chill rips through
silently causing pain.
In your embrace there's enough
strength to give sunshine in rain.
A Summer breeze brings smiles
of each stolen moment in your arms.
The Autumn leaves fall silently
reminding of your never ending charm.
© Emy Star
29 Sept 2003
Copyright ©
emystar
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2004-03-01 03:15:58]
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Re: TO HAVE YOUR LUV
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by DreamWeaver on
Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 03:18:55 AM AEST
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| Oooh I relate to this ... bittersweet write ... lovely ... Jan |
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by loveisendless on
Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 04:49:39 AM AEST
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COMPLETELY BEAUTIFUL,WHAT A GREAT WRITE! STRONG & OUT STANDING!! WAY 2
GO!!!
LOL-DAN!!!! |
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Re: TO HAVE YOUR LUV
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by lovingcritters on
Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 06:28:45 AM AEST
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Oh Emy to whomever....this is a deeply felt poem from the heart! A poem crying for love in someone's arms......and yet realizing this won't happen! Such beauty comparisons you write about Emy.....they extremely beautiful...as is your heart!
love you
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Re: TO HAVE YOUR LUV
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 07:24:06 AM AEST
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This is really lovely, Emy..... keep them coming....
Jenni |
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Re: TO HAVE YOUR LUV
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by Lone_er on
Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 07:45:54 AM AEST
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| Another beautifully writen poem maam. Love flows from it as surely as rain flows to the sea...Russ |
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Re: TO HAVE YOUR LUV
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by uchendu on
Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 01:24:54 PM AEST
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| When I read what I love.. I love to keep reading it.. you are a blessing to this site with the words you showcase.. u make me learn. I love it |
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Re: TO HAVE YOUR LUV
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by cubby33 on
Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 06:45:00 PM AEST
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My cousin David (Wachumiri) told me you were good and now I believe him. I like how you picked love as your topic. Love is what keeps me strong everyday, not only love for my family and friends but mostly God's love. Keep writing, your awesome!
Your brother in Christ ~Jacob~ |
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Re: TO HAVE YOUR LUV
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 07:32:13 PM AEST
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| awww! sweet emy! hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: TO HAVE YOUR LUV
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by RICHARD_CAMPBELL on
Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 11:05:48 PM AEST
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Hi emystar,
this is so wonderfull writen.
you express your self very well.good |
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Re: TO HAVE YOUR LUV
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by arden on
Tuesday, 2nd March 2004 @ 12:04:31 AM AEST
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nice i really like this. awesome job!! keep up the great work. ill be lookin out for more of your stuff
Arden |
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Re: TO HAVE YOUR LUV
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by desire on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 11:20:25 PM AEST
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| i simply love what you have written, i for one have felt this same way..i love the feeling of it...slr |
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