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Just Hurts
Contributed by
ginsdance
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Wednesday, 11th September 2002 @ 12:52:35 PM in AEST
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You hurt me today, you know,
I felt my heart begin to break,
You placed me last in line, again,
The only thing I could never take.
Talking to your friends,
And just pushing me aside,
Ignoring me so much,
That I turned away, you'll never see me cry.
I walked quickly on ahead of you,
Let you go on with your friends,
Left me alone, and still I waited, patiently,
For that conversation to end.
But the time kept on ticking by,
And soon it was time to leave,
I guess I've always known where your priorities are,
It just hurts because not a single one of them, is me.
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ginsdance
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Re: Just Hurts
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by cryingonmyporch on
Wednesday, 11th September 2002 @ 12:54:53 PM AEST
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| like I told princesspruty LOVE SUCKS until you find the right one |
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Re: Just Hurts
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by Chicken on
Thursday, 12th September 2002 @ 12:20:22 PM AEST
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| Gret poem Gin.....Time will heal your wounds.... |
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Re: Just Hurts
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by MisterRight on
Thursday, 12th September 2002 @ 02:33:26 PM AEST
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Great write Gin. And I do agree that "Time will heal your wounds." but I'm not one who believes that everything has a happy ending. So yes, wounds heal, but scars remain... and I have quite a few of them to prove it. All we can do when we're hurting is to try to find support in those around us. I hope you feel better soon.
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