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Much Taken From Shadow
Contributed by
Exodus-On-Life
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Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 01:48:08 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Darkness impenetrable darkness
Leave me alone
Cry for the effects
Weep for that which you'll never own
Gasp for breath as your lungs begin to fail
Squeeze my hand and you die
Breaking down and you avoid my face
Look into darkness and spread your lie
Losing never rewarded like this
You step away and I send the pain below
I smile as I fade into shadows
Feelings more than you'll ever know
Stronger than the weakest link
Lights brighter than the darkest fade
I'm walking away
Smile at the thoughts and you wished I would have stayed
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Exodus-On-Life
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2004-03-01 01:48:08]
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Re: Much Taken From Shadow
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by arden on
Tuesday, 2nd March 2004 @ 12:17:35 AM AEST
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interesting.... i like this. its good.
keep it up
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Re: Much Taken From Shadow
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by Juliet on
Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 03:53:10 PM AEST
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| Very thought -provoking. Nice. |
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Re: Much Taken From Shadow
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 20th November 2006 @ 06:22:53 AM AEST
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| This poem had a nice flow and rhythm to it.good Job! |
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