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Pleading with darkness
Contributed by
rAwjer
on
Sunday, 29th February 2004 @ 11:58:08 PM in AEST
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Darkness please dont leave me now
im so lonely here by myself
if you could seem to find the time
please shade my eyes from all this lite
let the sun go down
let the sun go down
let the sun go down
fallen here reflect the lite
let the sun go down and keep the nite
decembember breeze clenched fist
long sleeve shirts to hide scars upon the wrists
dead sea open eyes
rest your mind and cut out all the lies
a simple sadness on the brink of madness
no disclosure just overexposhier
I am bleeding now
no they cant see me now
its lost amoung the universe
good as dead by the next verse
left alone all alone
no place left to call my home
casual chat corrupted candle
lit is the flame and wax running down the handle
greedy eyes misplaced glance
lousy way to spend a second chance
empty spaces lonely places
glaring faces pointles chases
im magnify myself in the nite
purpose is for changes till its done right
a simple sadness on the brink of madness
no disclosure just overexposhier
I am bleeding now
no they cant see me now
its lost amoung the universe
good as dead by the next verse
Darkness please dont leave me now
im so lonely here by myself
if you could seem to find the time
please shade my eyes from all this lite
let the sun go down
let the sun go down
let the sun go down
fallen here reflect the lite
let the sun go down and keep the nite
decembember breeze clenched fist
long sleeve shirts to hide scars upon the wrists
dead sea open eyes
rest your mind and cut out all the lies
Darkness please dont leave me now
im so lonely here by myself
Copyright ©
rAwjer
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2004-02-29 23:58:08]
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Re: Pleading with darkness
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by loveisendless on
Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 12:42:40 AM AEST
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IT'S LIKE A SAD SONG SAYING SO MUCH! A
CREATIVE & DESCRIPTIVE WAY TO WRITE!!
DAN!!! |
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Re: Pleading with darkness
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by lilch4ever on
Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 01:14:43 AM AEST
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| Very lovely song yet sad. It was very good. I really enjoyed it a lot. Very describtive. Well written. :) |
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Re: Pleading with darkness
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by Dorrie on
Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 03:35:10 PM AEST
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This is an awesome poem compared to what I write.
Keep writing great poems |
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