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Dying Light
Contributed by
Cobalt
on
Sunday, 29th February 2004 @ 10:00:55 PM in AEST
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I watched the world fade away,
I know I faded away too.
Had to get away from here.
Couldn't stand you next to me.
Held the knife to my lips and
whispered gently to it's shine.
I couldn't stand you by my side
so I washed it all away.
The knife kisses so gently
I'm entranced by my rapture.
Dragon eyes blaze with hate
as everything slips into darkness.
Screaming for all I've ever lost
and for everything I'll never have.
Couldn't stay with you and
now it's all over.
I watched the world float
into the shadow of the setting sun.
Raven's Sin
Copyright ©
Cobalt
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2004-02-29 22:00:55]
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Re: Dying Light
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by Kie on
Sunday, 29th February 2004 @ 10:07:55 PM AEST
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This was so sad it brought tears to my eyes. Do not give up hope, if you are alive there is hope and the next woman you fall in love with will be everything you need. It will get better, promise.
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Re: Dying Light
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 29th February 2004 @ 10:15:57 PM AEST
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Lmao at your comment....but smile slowly turning upside down as I read your poem... This is really sad..but so lovely.... Hope all is well, Jeff..
Hugs
Jenni
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Re: Dying Light
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by Mick_Puttock on
Sunday, 29th February 2004 @ 11:48:17 PM AEST
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| sad poem, but I had to make a comment. Mick wouldnt beat anyone up, I know him, he just isnt like that !! |
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Re: Dying Light
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by loveisendless on
Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 02:01:56 AM AEST
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IT'S HARD TO KEEP SOME THINGS ALIVE!
COOL POEM!!
DAN!!! |
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Re: Dying Light
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by arden on
Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 12:41:51 PM AEST
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really good. i like how its worded, really really awesome, loved it.
Arden |
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Re: Dying Light
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by poetrygodslove on
Friday, 5th March 2004 @ 05:20:20 PM AEST
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| you been in pain to long.. here is a hug.. good write. sandy |
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