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-blood soaked silloette-
Contributed by
TaintedOptomist
on
Sunday, 29th February 2004 @ 09:18:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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tears gleam on her cheek
as blood drips off the knife
a mixed up little girl
only six-teen
ends her life
AS THE GAZE COVERS HER EYES
AND THE PAIN SOON SLIPS AWAY
SHE JUST DOESN'T HAVE THE STRENGTH
TO FACE ANOTHER DAY
UNFRIENDLY FACES ALL AROUND HER
finaly the release
the release of all her fears
SHE'S BEEN WAITING SO LONG
just another sad song ringing ni her ears
love, loath,and depression built up for so many years
SOME MAY NOT THINK IT'S RIGHT
BUT SHE DOESN'T SEE THE WRONG
and with her final breath
she plays another sad song
by: klay/FIFIT
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TaintedOptomist
... [
2004-02-29 21:18:24]
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Re: -blood soaked silloette-
(User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on
Sunday, 29th February 2004 @ 10:36:26 PM AEST
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Very sad but written well!
It also opens ones eyes to what our younger generations and the desperation they feel.
A good job here.
It would be good if you could write another one that gives ones option to live instead of death.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: -blood soaked silloette-
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by WorthlesSanity666 on
Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 04:21:42 PM AEST
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| Wonderful poem. Absolutely amazing & full of emotion. Good write. I thik it's cool how you wrote this as a team. It's a wonderful idea. Keep it up! |
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