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Night
Contributed by
faith_my_eyes
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Sunday, 29th February 2004 @ 08:40:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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A blanket of darkness bathes the land
Cleansing it of sin
Chasing away the hurt and anger
Relieves of anguish
And takes solace in sleep.
The dark of the land
Bathing the pain of a terrible day
Slowly lurks off
As slowly as it came
A glowing sphere breaks the sky
Kissing the heavens with light
Once again
Warming the world
With hope of a new day.
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faith_my_eyes
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2004-02-29 20:40:25]
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Re: Night
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by Fionndruinne on
Sunday, 29th February 2004 @ 09:01:26 PM AEST
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Wow. Here's that very, very vivid style I've seen before. Nice job. But you're always a good poet.
Keep it up. |
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Re: Night
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 29th February 2004 @ 09:56:07 PM AEST
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There is nothing wrong with your work. It is beautiful and you will only get better. Do not be discouraged and keep writing. Your style is lovely and I don't see that it needs improvement. More and more can only make you better.
Rainbows,
Rita |
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Re: Night
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 29th February 2004 @ 10:42:08 PM AEST
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Nothing happened...Good work here!!
Jenni |
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Re: Night
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by Pwei on
Tuesday, 16th March 2004 @ 05:23:43 PM AEST
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| Hiya, I like this. Its really powerful. You haven't lost the spark. Sometimes it just burns brighter than at other times. BE happy! Glitter and purple clouds...MARK |
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Re: Night
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by Pwei on
Tuesday, 16th March 2004 @ 05:24:21 PM AEST
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| Hiya, I like this. Its really powerful. You haven't lost the spark. Sometimes it just burns brighter than at other times. BE happy! Glitter and purple clouds...MARK |
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Re: Night
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by Wachumiri on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 12:47:30 AM AEST
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You haven't lost the poetic talent. The fire is still blazing...
Take care.
David |
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Re: Night
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by lostinmyself on
Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 12:00:39 PM AEST
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| your writing is very beautiful.i love this. amazing write. *hugs* phil xxx |
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Re: Night
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Monday, 10th October 2005 @ 12:18:49 AM AEST
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The more I read your work Emily the more I get drawn into reading more. Never doubt your poetic talent. You got it girl.
*hugs*
Sue |
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