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Bash My Head In
Contributed by
HedderMarie
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Sunday, 29th February 2004 @ 07:49:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Someone bash my head in,
Someone please,
Kill me now,
Take away my agony.
Take a brick to my skull,
To kill my mind,
Tear away at my soul,
To pass the time.
Make it slow,
Because I feel that is what I deserve,
This soul wants to die,
No longer wanting to be preserved.
It screams in my ears,
Tears away at my heart,
No longer wanting to live this life,
From this world it wants to be apart.
These tears sting my eyes,
I can feel my agony,
I feel so lost,
I know I'm not me.
A pull at my hair,
With these burdened fingers,
I can't help this frame of mind,
In me it has always lingered.
I am not grateful for this life,
Nor will I ever be,
It's too much a strife,
Bash in my head for me.
*Heather Marie Hutchins*
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HedderMarie
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2004-02-29 19:49:57]
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Re: Bash My Head In
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by WorthlesSanity666 on
Sunday, 29th February 2004 @ 08:01:39 PM AEST
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| Wow, that was truely amazing. You have extrordinary talent. The way you described your emotions was phenomenal! However, I'm very sorry you feel this way. It was wonderfully wtitten. |
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Re: Bash My Head In
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Sunday, 29th February 2004 @ 08:02:35 PM AEST
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I liked the way this poem flowed with rythem, although Im not going to be the one bash and ruin such a talented person.
Awsome write, although harsh it was darkness at its best.
Keep on writing. |
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