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lost spirit
Contributed by
SAT
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Sunday, 29th February 2004 @ 07:44:16 PM in AEST
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he looks at me with confusion
speechless, he doesnt talk
he's not very happy but he'll deal
he made me suffer, now its his turn
he needs to stop treating us like this
we're his slaves for two seconds
and then he takes us out like garbage
and now he is the garbage
and we are the garbage trucks
we are gonna tear his soul in two
he needs to learn his lesson
or he will never live to tell about this
and i know how he treated me was bad
but he is still the love of my life
and i have to save him from himself
only his worst enemy isnt himself
it is all of us and our will to overcome
he is not going to leave this world
without paying his dues to us
and i am stuck here until he does
because he is my unfinished business
and i am only a lost spirit without him.
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SAT
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2004-02-29 19:44:16]
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Re: lost spirit
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Sunday, 29th February 2004 @ 08:09:22 PM AEST
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A good write, a sad poem in a way, I enjoyed reading it.
Keep on writing. |
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Re: lost spirit
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by loveisendless on
Sunday, 29th February 2004 @ 11:03:33 PM AEST
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THAT WAS A GREAT WRITE(KINDA SAD)! I LOVED THE IMAGE YOU LAY OUT AS YOU SAY & TELL US OF ALL THE DOUBTS!! LOVE
IS A LIFE,& SHOULD NEVER DIE!!! AT LEAST YOU SHOW HOW TUFF YOU ARE & JUST HOW MUCH ASS YOU CAN KICK!!!! MORE POWER TO YA!!!!!
LOL-DAN!!!!!! |
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