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my soul
Contributed by
Pyro
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Sunday, 29th February 2004 @ 05:34:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
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i have defined a path so great that no mortal shall pass it
this path leads to my soul
it is what makes me whole
it is said to be told
to be extremely cold
it can not be controlled
its true story is untold
it is so deep it could swallow you whole
my soul is said to behold
a treasure unknown
that can not be cloned
never to be owned
making souls moan
and there body's groan
it can take you and break you
with out a moments hesitation
it can make you realize
what you truly fantasize
this is my soul
and you shall not enter
Copyright ©
Pyro
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2004-02-29 17:34:12]
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Re: my soul
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by wyrd_faerie on
Sunday, 29th February 2004 @ 05:47:08 PM AEST
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| this is amazing... |
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Re: my soul
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Sunday, 29th February 2004 @ 05:58:38 PM AEST
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Awesome poem , was good read.
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Re: my soul
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by arden on
Tuesday, 2nd March 2004 @ 01:33:08 AM AEST
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great write. i really really like this. awesome job keep it up
Arden |
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