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Rot
Contributed by
MorbidMongrel
on
Sunday, 29th February 2004 @ 05:14:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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You left me to rot
Left me to decay
Left me to die...
Abandoned me in my time of need
Dulled my senses
Confused my mind
Vultures
Swooping and pecking at me
Sent by you...
You wanted me to hate you
To despise you
So I would move on
Well I've never moved on
Grown closer
Accept your own failure
If I died
Then I've been reanimated
To torment your mistake
You hurt me
Broke me
Burned me
Lacerated me
Couldn't you have just told me the truth?
What was really going on?
Instead of killing who I was?
Remember that girl that I broke
Your actions incurred this
Despite your disapproval
The student is rebelling
You, the teacher
Must move on
Remember what you did
When the time comes
To tell someone else to move on.......................
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2004-02-29 17:14:26]
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Re: Rot
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by Wesley_Dale_Willis on
Sunday, 29th February 2004 @ 05:17:41 PM AEST
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| That kind of hurt is the worst there is. Keep writing though. read one of mine,ok? Wes... |
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Re: Rot
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by Ruby1987 on
Sunday, 29th February 2004 @ 05:19:28 PM AEST
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powerful stuff-i love the style and the content
keep up the good work
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Re: Rot
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by Pyrofungus on
Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 08:49:15 PM AEST
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damn bro that really sucks! great poem though...filled with so much anger...
please comment on my work too
summer |
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