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A Relationship
Contributed by
ruby1987
on
Sunday, 29th February 2004 @ 04:47:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Bruised eyes
Red cheeks
Cut lip
Twisted arm
Cracked back
Dented stomach
Broken heart
Weeping-
On the floor
By the bed
In which
You lay
Copyright ©
ruby1987
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2004-02-29 16:47:47]
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Re: A Relationship
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by Wesley_Dale_Willis on
Sunday, 29th February 2004 @ 05:04:32 PM AEST
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| Nice short write Ruby. Hope to see more in here. read my latest please. Wes... |
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Re: A Relationship
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 29th February 2004 @ 05:21:11 PM AEST
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you are angry! nice one though!
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Re: A Relationship
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by faith_my_eyes on
Sunday, 29th February 2004 @ 07:19:40 PM AEST
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| very, very emotional and angry. I love how it is so staccato and to the point |
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Re: A Relationship
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by nirupam on
Thursday, 24th March 2011 @ 12:55:20 PM AEST
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| brief and poignant...emotionally convincing.... |
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