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Trickles
Contributed by
olive
on
Sunday, 29th February 2004 @ 04:12:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Warm trickles
that start
at the base of origin, euphoria, pain
and spread
achingly up
up up
getting there is such a flow, but so..
ha........we're......
so happy in this world sometimes.....
oh god..........
trickles spreading so quickly
and
oh! ha!
quick as can be
oh
oh oh
And OH isn't life honest right now
HA!
OH
trickles
and light
and lighter light
and
suddenly I'm gone
everything is gone while I bask in the memory of it
and.....
oh, the relief that reaches down into me.
Copyright ©
olive
... [
2004-02-29 16:12:29]
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Re: Trickles
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 29th February 2004 @ 04:15:37 PM AEST
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I like the originality! well done.
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Re: Trickles
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 29th February 2004 @ 05:11:49 PM AEST
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| the images that come to mind.... my my.... hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Trickles
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by Wesley_Dale_Willis on
Sunday, 29th February 2004 @ 05:19:50 PM AEST
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| I agree we are but a vapor then were gone. Keep writing. read one of mine. Wes... |
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