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Let it all out
Contributed by
icryblacktearz
on
Sunday, 29th February 2004 @ 12:26:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I'm trapped, in this never ending love story,
When when boy meets girl,
and they all inlove,
it seems to perfeft to go wrong,
but then there is no song,
to explain what went wrong,
i cant seem to stop thinking about those words,
the ones that we promised not too long ago,
its like i've lost all will power to do ne thing,
and i cant see to find a comfort,
i want to just die,
i dont even want to sit and try,
i cant escape the pain im in,
i want to die..
i gave up the best thing i had,
for the excuse i used was, i need to think,
well i thought about it, and i've poundered upon it,
and i know one thing is real,
that i miss you more then the blood i drew,
i hope death is what i recieve from above,
im sorry if im tellin u to much,
but this is all i've got to say,
and im gonna be put down to stay.
i miss u and i love you.
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icryblacktearz
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2004-02-29 12:26:35]
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Re: Let it all out
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by BrghtNSnshny on
Sunday, 29th February 2004 @ 04:15:03 PM AEST
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| That is so sad, i can feel the pain. that was a beautiful write. it shows such great emotion. |
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Re: Let it all out
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Sunday, 29th February 2004 @ 05:52:42 PM AEST
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lovers come and go, the best thing you have is your life, don't give up, there will always be something worth living for.
nice write here |
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