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Mazda Confessional
Contributed by
PumpkinPie
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Sunday, 29th February 2004 @ 01:50:41 AM in AEST
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Can you believe he didn't notice me today
As I slam the cherry car door in disarray
From mine his feelings are so diverse
As I move my stickshift into first
I can't stand work,it's become a struggle
As I carelessly press the light gas pedal
She ended our friendship right then and there
As I roll my window down for some air
And school seems tedious did you know
As I turn on the the little car radio
I admit prospects with my beloved are bleak
As a sad love song blares it's way on the chart this week
Streetlights glow on the moonlit dashboard
As I sing my lungs out to every chord
The red light brings curious gazers upon I
As I tattle my emotions available to the eye
Tomorrow my car will be an euphoric oasis
Blissful content will be heard ever so joyous
And that's why it's named Mazda confessional
Because it always listens and never labels
Copyright ©
PumpkinPie
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Re: Mazda Confessional
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by emystar on
Sunday, 29th February 2004 @ 02:00:30 AM AEST
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Cute-n-very creative!
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: Mazda Confessional
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by loveisendless on
Sunday, 29th February 2004 @ 02:05:31 AM AEST
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NICE POEM,EVERYBODY NEEDS SOME TIME TO THEM SELVES! SO,I AGREE WITH YOUR THOUGHTS!!
DAN!!! |
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Re: Mazda Confessional
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 29th February 2004 @ 03:07:42 AM AEST
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| very unique and cute, im currently a bit at odds with mine, the radio doesnt work, and the heat quit and on and on, but i still like it, and so do the dogs:) hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Mazda Confessional
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by Rakerman1999 on
Sunday, 29th February 2004 @ 10:24:09 AM AEST
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Fun, fresh, and downright delightful!
I truly enjoyed this Cindy :o)
Roses
Larry |
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Re: Mazda Confessional
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by Stitch on
Tuesday, 2nd March 2004 @ 01:02:53 PM AEST
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Goodness, I can related completely! I always spend my car time in converse with the Lord---lamenting all the shortfalls in my life. I've even owned 2 Mazdas---one red and one blue. Loved them both. This is great!
Stitch |
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Re: Mazda Confessional
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by twinkletoes on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 01:23:33 AM AEST
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a very well written poem, full of all the right stuff...R&R.
my car is called the cone of silence.
tt |
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Re: Mazda Confessional
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by venkat on
Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 06:56:38 AM AEST
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| hi..its a cute and delightful poem..nice read. venkat |
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Re: Mazda Confessional
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by RobertKilpatrick on
Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 12:31:50 AM AEST
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Great little Mazda eh! Good read..
Cheers Robert |
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Re: Mazda Confessional
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by blueheart on
Sunday, 25th July 2004 @ 10:48:53 PM AEST
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Thats a great idea , to ponder in your car.
I wish I had my very own car, I'd stay in there and never come out.
A delightful piece of poetry. :) |
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Re: Mazda Confessional
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by Overstated on
Saturday, 18th September 2004 @ 04:54:12 PM AEST
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This poem has a glittering style about it. Your poems are so good because they are always so unalike from one to the next- that’s very hard to achieve but your opening line set the pace nicely ‘Can you believe he didn't notice me today’.
The title instantly reminded me of one my favourite bands dashboard confessional which drew me in. ;)
Your poem also illustrates the importance of the car – it really does become like an extra room in the house. A place where you can be alone to think or just feel lonely in. I feel like I can relate to this poem.. Rod
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Re: Mazda Confessional
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by Spazzo on
Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 02:52:01 PM AEST
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Beautiful.
Spazzo |
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Re: Mazda Confessional
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 12:50:24 PM AEST
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| This was great. I drive a Mazda too, when I drive, which isn't often. Funny how we can remember places and times and feelings from music on the car radio. This was most imaginative. Cheers! |
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Re: Mazda Confessional
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 18th September 2005 @ 12:16:34 AM AEST
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I really really enjoyed reading this. Full of creative flare and imagery. Absolutely a wonderful write.
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