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Special Guy

Contributed by whitney07 on Sunday, 29th February 2004 @ 01:37:31 AM in AEST
Topic: Grief

I talked to him yesterday
he asked me why i was depressed
at first I was afraid to say
but then I did it anyway
He asked am I involved
I slowly answered yes
very scared and embarassed
I was at that point
I said you won't care
so why waste your time listening
the reply was I do care
come on you can tell me
So as I began
my hands were shaking terribly
I could hardly speak
but still continued to say
Why do you have to do this to me?
treat me this way
I feel so unloved
but that's probably what you wanted me to say
No I don't
how could you say such a thing
you are one of my best friends
and that's not all you'll ever be
I started to cry
and couldn't talk anymore
I am so heart broken
oh what can I do now
My heart is being torn
oh it hurts inside my chest
I want to feel good again
and I am trying my best
You said I'm sorry
for whatever I have done
but listen don't you worry
your pain inside is over
Deep down inside I began to feel better
I stopped crying and wiped my eyes to dry
maybe this had helped me
talking to him that special guy

Copyright © whitney07 ... [ 2004-02-29 01:37:31]
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Re: Special Guy (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Sunday, 29th February 2004 @ 08:12:19 PM AEST
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You expressed yourself so well in this poem. Brought tears to my eyes. Well done. Kie

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