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Your all for him
Contributed by
cubby33
on
Sunday, 29th February 2004 @ 01:07:42 AM in AEST
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1st verse:
My feelings for you
Are now very strong
If I follow my heart
Things coulds go wrong
Iv'e gone wrong before
I hope not again
But one thing for sure
Our friendship will never end!
Chorus:
Your all for Him
All for Him
It's time to cleanse
My soul within
Your all for Him
All for Him
It's time to give you
All to Him
Your all for Him
2nd verse:
That's why I've decided
To give you all to Jesus
He'll show us our path
And he'll always lead us
So now I pray
That we'll grow strong
Not just in our friendship
But where our hearts truly belong
Chorus
3rd verse:
I could call you "My Love"
Because I'd, I'd die for you
But first to God
I got to be true
Chorus
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2004-02-29 01:07:42]
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Re: Your all for him
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by Fionndruinne on
Sunday, 29th February 2004 @ 01:20:57 AM AEST
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Great job! You have better rhythm than you-know-who. (inside joke, people) Keep writing. About HER.
You learn well, my son. |
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Re: Your all for him
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by emystar on
Sunday, 29th February 2004 @ 01:27:55 AM AEST
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Very good!
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: Your all for him
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by Wachumiri on
Sunday, 29th February 2004 @ 01:36:54 AM AEST
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Well written poem. The rhythm could/should be, I think in a more ballad, lovesong style. NOT PUNK ROCK! (Inside Joke)
Yah, well it's nice that you decided to join us.
Take care.
David |
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Re: Your all for him
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by uchendu on
Tuesday, 2nd March 2004 @ 11:19:47 AM AEST
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| Another great song from you. Good write up.. U have something special about the way u write songs.. get on and I will be ya fan. |
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