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Bitter-Sweet Snowflakes
Contributed by
WorthlesSanity666
on
Sunday, 29th February 2004 @ 12:39:31 AM in AEST
Topic:
insomniac
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In hopeful depression,
I run outside.
I spread my arms and twirl
in the falling flight of
innocently evil snow.
I open my wet mouth,
cracked and dry.
I let out a hysterically serious laugh.
The air is so clean,
I'm smothered in smog.
I throw armfuls of snow into the air.
It falls back into my
hair and face.
It gives me such miserable pleasure.
I stop to look at
the darkly bright sky,
to hear the deafening silence.
I fall into a heap in the snow and sit there for hours.
The cold warmth numbs me.
I lie there with
a menacingly innocent smile on my face.
Never before have I felt so deadly alive.
Copyright ©
WorthlesSanity666
... [
2004-02-29 00:39:31]
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Re: Bitter-Sweet Snowflakes
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by lil_angel on
Sunday, 29th February 2004 @ 12:42:59 AM AEST
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| This is really good, made me laugh, i hope that was the intent! |
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Re: Bitter-Sweet Snowflakes
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by emystar on
Sunday, 29th February 2004 @ 12:56:29 AM AEST
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The meaning I get is snow can beautifull but it can kill.
So like life It can be really good at times but then it can also be very bad at times.
This is a masterpeice as it sends out a strong message.
Very good!
Luv, huggs, bitter sweet.
Luv, huggs,
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Re: Bitter-Sweet Snowflakes
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by blueheart on
Sunday, 29th February 2004 @ 05:45:55 AM AEST
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| Nice descriptions, I like it a lot. There was a surge of energy through the poem. |
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Re: Bitter-Sweet Snowflakes
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by TwEeK on
Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 07:36:58 PM AEST
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| your trying to find the good in the world, its a poem of a depressed guy try' n to have fun, hes crazy to....i guess, i dunno thats all i think of it but it was cool and funny i must say! |
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