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A Thin Line
Contributed by
JadedExistence
on
Saturday, 28th February 2004 @ 10:53:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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I want you to go away
I want to to leave me alone
I want you to just listen
And hear the words I say
Don't pat me on the head
Don't treat me like a child
I'm not a little dog
To walk where I'm led
I don't want you near me
I want you to leave
Once I loved you
But you just couldn't see
There's a very thin line
Between love and hate
You pushed me accross
So now my heart is mine
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JadedExistence
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2004-02-28 22:53:08]
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Re: A Thin Line
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 28th February 2004 @ 11:14:58 PM AEST
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| wonderfully expressed, hang in there..... hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: A Thin Line
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by jbrow on
Saturday, 28th February 2004 @ 11:33:48 PM AEST
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I like it you took your heart back. great job.
p's
Gene |
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Re: A Thin Line
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by Floo on
Saturday, 3rd April 2004 @ 10:46:30 AM AEST
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| *grins* I just love how you can write with feelings of anger and upset without making it seem cliched or over done... when you're reading the poem it feels real and not fake and *sigh* it's such a good poem too!!! I can totally relate to this poem to wihch makes it even more amazing when I read it!!!! |
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