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Trapped Inside
Contributed by
InteruptedFate
on
Saturday, 28th February 2004 @ 10:52:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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You built these walls,
That surround my soul,
Im locked inside,
With silver and gold.
I dug myself deep,
Into this hole,
Where you built these walls,
That surround my soul.
I used to see love,
Inside your green eyes,
But now it is dead,
And I'm barely alive.
Feeling at lost,
And out of control,
You built these walls,
that surround my soul.
I don't need you to,
Buy me pretty things,
I don't want this love,
Or your diamond rings.
Youve locked me inside,
My bloods turning cold,
You built these walls,
That surround my soul.
I've tryed getting out,
And running away,
In hopes that you,
Would always stay.
You followed me,
And tracked me down,
You locked me inside,
And I can't get out.
I just want to be free,
Get me out of this hole,
You built these walls,
That surround my soul.
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InteruptedFate
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2004-02-28 22:52:43]
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Re: Trapped Inside
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 28th February 2004 @ 11:08:32 PM AEST
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| mmm.... very sad vividly written well laid out poem, keep writing:) hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Trapped Inside
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by Elf on
Saturday, 28th February 2004 @ 11:43:18 PM AEST
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I love this one! It speaks so clearly and painted such a vivid picture in my mind. Of course, that may be because I've been there before. Anywho! It's a great write!
-*Valen*- |
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Re: Trapped Inside
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by Floo on
Saturday, 3rd April 2004 @ 10:44:02 AM AEST
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| Ohhhh such a deliciously tragic poem you've written here!!! It can be interepretated in so many ways to, you capture the sense of entrapment and feelings of helplessness wonderfully!!! |
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