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A Child Awakes
Contributed by
Whisper
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Saturday, 28th February 2004 @ 08:25:35 PM in AEST
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A bump in the beginning, a gift ,from above.
A Love Making of two.
This tiny creature with no one to welcome her arrival
The tiny lids fluttered open, surrounded in beauty to her then unknowing mind.
Awesome and in the warm light, seems comforting on her face.
Thoughts of where she was and what part she will play .
Just where did she fit in?
This small child peering in.
She was rushed from her warm haven, in the shell of her mother,and without much ado.
Cold air and Chill surrounds her, she's not floating any more.
Only the recollection of two teary glowing orbs, that were her mother's eyes, are there for a fleeting moment - then gone.
Wrapped and alone in a strange new world Without Love to guide or Hope to hold.
This small little creature is at mans' own whim
Only he can decide, which one of us will win.
Alas a long story begins.
Copyright ©
Whisper
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2004-02-28 20:25:35]
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Re: A Child Awakes
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 28th February 2004 @ 09:40:10 PM AEST
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| this is excellent, love your images, message, and meaning, thank you for sharing this poem:) hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: A Child Awakes
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by lil_angel on
Saturday, 28th February 2004 @ 10:56:35 PM AEST
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| Great write! |
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Re: A Child Awakes
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by deathdrop on
Saturday, 6th March 2004 @ 05:43:15 PM AEST
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you should write a part 2 of this.
well done, brought a tear to my eye though... |
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