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Flowers
Contributed by
lil_angel
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Saturday, 28th February 2004 @ 07:42:53 PM in AEST
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Bright flowers blooming
Stepped on by a passer by
Do not grow anymore
Copyright ©
lil_angel
... [
2004-02-28 19:42:53]
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Re: Flowers
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 28th February 2004 @ 07:48:20 PM AEST
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| this is great, just like life, depends if one is the flower or the foot:) hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Flowers
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by Kie on
Saturday, 28th February 2004 @ 09:07:22 PM AEST
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| Enjoyed your poem. Kie |
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Re: Flowers
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 28th February 2004 @ 09:18:54 PM AEST
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Hi sweetie; Yes, we should always be careful of what we do or say. Sometimes without us realizing it we can crush anothers heart or soul.
Excellent,
Rita |
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Re: Flowers
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by jbrow on
Saturday, 28th February 2004 @ 11:46:52 PM AEST
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I like this one short, and sweet
great write
p's
Gene |
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Re: Flowers
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by jbrow on
Saturday, 28th February 2004 @ 11:46:55 PM AEST
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I like this one short, and sweet
great write
p's
Gene |
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Re: Flowers
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by MoonlitAngel on
Sunday, 29th February 2004 @ 12:07:42 AM AEST
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The last line had one too many syllables. Nice poem though.
~ Dee |
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Re: Flowers
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 29th February 2004 @ 09:23:55 PM AEST
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| this is one of those poems that could be interpreted differently by anyone who reads it.....these poems never get old. great job and very created |
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Re: Flowers
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by Cynthia on
Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 02:05:00 PM AEST
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| This is short, but it's sweet. Nice write. *S* Cynthia |
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