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only in my dreams
Contributed by
ladyfawn
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Saturday, 28th February 2004 @ 07:39:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
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only in my dreams do i see me happy, kissed by sunlight, living the life i believe i was meant to live, and have longed all my life to live, where fairys flutter, maybe an english countryside, some where love always abides, rests beside me, gardens full of tomorrows, fragrant blooming roses, butterflies and bees, cat on the porch licking its paw, many mellow horses with contented nickerings in the pastures, dogs with no fences safe to live a dog's life, highest majestic mountains with lakes, more beauty all around me than i could ever imagine by contemplation alone, ...all the ones i love, all together, for once not scattered everywhere... near distance somewhere close to a harbor with a pier, where i could go to sit and write long hours into the nights, beside me my dogs, gentle breezes blowing in hair and fur, ...upon returning home lighting a candle row, closing the curtains, watering houseplants that hang from every point ones eye can see, so many green leaves, it is so charming, ...this wish, this dream, a silent wishful part of me that no longer dies; but is fullfilled; victorian home with country flare, bedroom with antique rose wallpaper, alas a home with so much more room, an old country cottage type is in my dreams, quaint, beautiful, but.. i do not see myself alone there, someone loves me who will never leave, never die, my fantasy dreamworld of smiles, hugs and laughter, hearts are warm, minds at peace, life breathes richly upon the air, in this make-believe paradise of mine, although in my dreams and day dreams it is real, could be real, ...i imagine smelling those herbs, candles, vegetables strewn on wooden counters, hanging baskets, some sitting on the floor, owning more pottery than i could ever dust in a days time, many bookshelves, assorted interesting crafts made with love, apples, everything gently spilling over to make this home complete, in disorganized organization, my style, my fashion, with flare, ...visitors who come in the day by light and dark of night spilling with laughter, pies and flowers, noon tea, only in my dreams, ...fresh flowers are always on my kitchen table, more antiques of darkest wood i would have, up some stairs a nook with my desk, overlooking an old tree with a birds nest in it, where each spring i could watch the birdlings learn to fly, this room has inward walls, its cozy, charming and quaint, when i write my whole world is emanating of peace and serenity, this is where i will finish writing my novels, more poetry, always poetry for sanity, ...this room has a couch but there are always dogs laying upon it snoring, a pillow for their heads, pretty much like where i am in reality, but this couch is bigger, and they all can fit, i walk up more steps to the attic, an excited thrill, musty dusty but so serene, boxes of memories, wistful me, ...going downstairs i light a fire in a huge stone fireplace, made from hardworking hands from ancestral times gone by, my lover brings me a cup of tea {i'm really dreamin' now}, ...contentedly i look out the one remaining flowery curtain not yet pulled shut, stars in the sky, seeing some deep place in my soul, right through this window, that is only in my dreams...
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Re: only in my dreams
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by Rakerman1999 on
Saturday, 28th February 2004 @ 08:04:12 PM AEST
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ahhhh such dreams......beautiful, serene, peaceful. This makes me sigh ......
Roses
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Re: only in my dreams
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by Kie on
Saturday, 28th February 2004 @ 08:07:41 PM AEST
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| Awww Nessa you write so beautifully and elegantly. I feel privileged to read your work. Kie |
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Re: only in my dreams
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 28th February 2004 @ 09:20:41 PM AEST
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This is beautiful, Nessa. You keep on dreaming and when you do, dream big. Sometimes dreams do come true!
Hugs,
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Re: only in my dreams
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by LOWMAN613 on
Saturday, 28th February 2004 @ 09:51:35 PM AEST
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Dreams are great only the good ones that is!
Never give up on your dreams! Be true to them & they will be true to you! Christina |
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Re: only in my dreams
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by venkat on
Sunday, 29th February 2004 @ 02:55:45 AM AEST
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| Wow..a wonderful dream. venkat |
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Re: only in my dreams
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 29th February 2004 @ 10:28:58 PM AEST
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Awwww.. stunning!! Some day, Sweetie, your dreams will come true... and when they do...look out!!!!!
Love and hugs..and some woofies..
Jenni |
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Re: only in my dreams
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by twinkletoes on
Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 07:52:45 PM AEST
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beautiful prose, hope you get that cup of tea one day :0)
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Re: only in my dreams
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by Merry on
Tuesday, 2nd March 2004 @ 12:44:05 PM AEST
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a dreamscape that blooms in the heart, it is beautiful and remember - dreams do come true
such a lovely write nessa - made me whistful.
hugs
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Re: only in my dreams
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 03:59:55 PM AEST
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You paint such beautiful images on the mind
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Re: only in my dreams
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by Jarmen_Kell on
Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 01:07:16 AM AEST
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If only, miss.....
If only we could live so.
If only, miss..... |
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Re: only in my dreams
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by bernard on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 03:46:40 AM AEST
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What a beautiful read you have given me. I wish I too could have such dreams, I wallowed in selfpity after reading your poem it is exceptionally good. You have written this poem that should be shared with more people try putting it in the local press for a start and then to some of the daily's. many newspaper print poetry if it is good and this is well above average. Thank you for a most enjoyable read.
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