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Would You Come in?
Contributed by
Whisper
on
Saturday, 28th February 2004 @ 07:17:54 PM in AEST
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Peering faces take a glance in.
Like open windows they beckon from within
Come one Come all Enter In
Faces they are all the same, looking and watching, silently; questioning what!.
Eyes grow bright and round with Wonder
Tears sipping from the corners of some.
What sadness/gladness do they see?
Come peer closer through the window if you dare. Are you human enough to enter through and beyond?
The window is only Glass so easily broken.
Come one Come all Enter In
Come
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2004-02-28 19:17:54]
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Re: Would You Come in?
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 28th February 2004 @ 07:35:03 PM AEST
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gets you thinking doesn't it? this is realy good
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Re: Would You Come in?
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by Jellybellyprincess on
Saturday, 28th February 2004 @ 10:47:58 PM AEST
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ooh, I like the topic of this one. Idea's just marvelous =)
I'll agree with Johnny there and say that this one really gets the reader to think. And it does a very good job of it.
I say well done =)
God bless,
Ellen
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