|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Trodden Underfoot
Contributed by
SensitiveSoAbused
on
Saturday, 28th February 2004 @ 05:43:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
|
I hear you typing there,
so silently;
see you here, typing their
words of wisdom.
This mentorship,
this mental sh*t,
are you trying to become them?
Scuse me miss, that sweater looks
so becoming on you.
Yet if I were on you,
I'd becoming too...
And now, with each letter,
each word,
reach better,
reach further
You... into them.
And then
them (they)
may not respond,
reciprocate,
their words, their scorn
cannot penetrate these white walls,
coffee stained--
Bloodstained;
so wondrous,
this initial penetration,
of my cogniscant mind,
I am in awe:
you hear only their
non-existant praise,
your carmine skirt twirling
as you spin among the roses
thrown by Fans of Fabrication,
brown petals, thorns
trodden underfoot...
Copyright ©
SensitiveSoAbused
... [
2004-02-28 17:43:00]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Trodden Underfoot
(User Rating: 1 )
by doug on
Saturday, 28th February 2004 @ 05:48:11 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
very interesting and a good poem
keep it up your friend doug |
|
|
Re: Trodden Underfoot
(User Rating: 1 )
by Asatru on
Saturday, 28th February 2004 @ 05:57:13 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| This is just an awesome poem, great word usage and how it makes you think is so awesome, good, good write. |
|
|
Re: Trodden Underfoot
(User Rating: 1 )
by loveisendless on
Saturday, 28th February 2004 @ 06:14:35 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
PRETTY POUNDING & ITS WELL SOUNDING!
DAN!! |
|
|
Re: Trodden Underfoot
(User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on
Tuesday, 2nd March 2004 @ 05:11:39 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| a great poem, great language. another great write. keep it up. luv phil xxx |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
