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What If
Contributed by
MorbidMongrel
on
Saturday, 28th February 2004 @ 05:05:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
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What if I had never broken that window?
Something else would have broken
Something far worse...
What if I had never accepted that invitation on that fated day?
I would have never reached out
Saw what I was missing
What if I wasn't the lookout that night...
We would have been busted
Thrown away without care
What if I had never asked her who she had fallen in love with?
We'd still be friends
And me, oblivious to it all
What if I had never driven him home to get his waiver?
My car would be saved
Never in disrepair
What if I had become what I dreamt?
I would be a statistic
A swinging body on a fan's blade
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MorbidMongrel
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2004-02-28 17:05:23]
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Re: What If
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by doug on
Saturday, 28th February 2004 @ 05:10:21 PM AEST
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| what if is a good question however what now is a better one. loved the poem your friend doug |
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Re: What If
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by loveisendless on
Saturday, 28th February 2004 @ 06:27:18 PM AEST
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WHAT IF-YOU NEVER WOULD'VE WROTE THIS POEM? WE WOULDN'T KNOW HOW MUCH YOU THINK OF OTHERS!! LOOKS LIKE YOUR HEAD & HEART ARE GOING INTO THE RIGHT DIRECTION!!!
DAN!!!! |
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Re: What If
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by New_York_Chick on
Saturday, 13th March 2004 @ 01:56:17 PM AEST
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i love your poem
it's so down to earth, because everyone asks "what if" at one point or the other
great job |
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