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Fall to grace
Contributed by
kellros
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Saturday, 28th February 2004 @ 02:20:10 PM in AEST
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This is my fall to grace,
my deepest desire
My power leaks from me as i miss her so much,
so much to even make a grown man cry
They do not understand, they do not believe,
they judge to fast, there's no trust in me
Like a dagger forced into my heart,
slowly twisting as the pain continues,
so unbearable, so depressing....
I keep on listening to what they are saying,
if i hear another word i'll choke,
i can't feel anything
Some days seem worthwhile, but where is LOVE?
I kiss her, i hold her, i call her mine,
she's my every desire,
she's my weakness, my fire
Breathe,
wake up,
don't try to hide...
the problems have arrived and i still stand by your side
My devotion, my everything is yours, i won't leave you....
Sing the praises of the damned,
sing my praises, damned to damnation, to hell
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kellros
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2004-02-28 14:20:10]
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Re: Fall to grace
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by lil_angel on
Saturday, 28th February 2004 @ 03:39:21 PM AEST
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| This is really well written! |
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Re: Fall to grace
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by Kellros on
Saturday, 28th February 2004 @ 05:27:27 PM AEST
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| thanks, somehow it seems like people just stopped reading my poems :-/, anyway thanks for reading this and i appreciate your support :) |
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Re: Fall to grace
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by WorthlesSanity666 on
Sunday, 29th February 2004 @ 12:58:23 AM AEST
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| Awsome poem! It really rocked. |
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