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Keep You Posted
Contributed by
symptom_recital
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Saturday, 28th February 2004 @ 01:57:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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It's been one whole month since I left home
30 days of being on my own
720 hours of life have passed me by
I've got not job, I just get drunk, break down and cry.
I feel like a burden, I feel such a pain
Depending on people again and again
Leaving that place was so hard to do
But now i'm here, will I make it through?
Will being here really ever feel right?
Sleeping in a different bed every other night
Will I ever feel the same?
Will I be engulfed by the guilt and the shame?
Only I can save me now.
Not you, not him, just me...somehow.
And how will I make it? What will I do?
...i'll get back to you.
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2004-02-28 13:57:22]
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Re: Keep You Posted
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by neglected1 on
Saturday, 28th February 2004 @ 02:09:02 PM AEST
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Very good... it told a story all on its own...
"What we do in life does not define us,
what defines us is how well we rise
after we fall"
Keep up the good work!!
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Re: Keep You Posted
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by doug on
Saturday, 28th February 2004 @ 04:13:36 PM AEST
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| i hope you make it through . good poem your friend doug |
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