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Learning to breathe
Contributed by
Chilibear
on
Saturday, 28th February 2004 @ 11:54:50 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Learning to breathe can take a really long time.
Falling in love... Saying goodbye.
Learning to breathe is feeling the sunshine in the morning, even when it rains.
Picking up the phone, to hear that sweet hello.
Turning on the light, to feel the heat glow.
Holding your hand, while you're holding mine.
Knowing that Forever is never enough time.
Falling asleep early to see you in my dreams.
Finding color in the darkest things.
Learning to breathe is wanting to be with you,
Every second, every hour, every night and every day.
Now i've got to ask, cause i need to know.
Can you teach me how to breathe?
Cause he just let me go.
Copyright ©
Chilibear
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2004-02-28 11:54:50]
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Re: Learning to breathe
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by neglected1 on
Saturday, 28th February 2004 @ 02:36:11 PM AEST
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simple but very superior ...
Remarkably done .. keep up the good work
-one word with too many meanings leave you wondering... but many words with one meanin leaves you in awe-
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Re: Learning to breathe
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by fallensilence on
Saturday, 28th February 2004 @ 02:59:46 PM AEST
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| neglected makes a good point. this is a very powerful poem. i liked the style you used alot. -david |
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Re: Learning to breathe
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by whisper-of-night on
Friday, 19th March 2004 @ 12:23:22 AM AEST
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| you know what? out all of your poems, I reckon this one is the best! Hmm, so you want learn how to breathe, but you just took my breathe away!!! I love this poem! Beautiful....... |
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