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Prism of Reflection
Contributed by
forever_lonely
on
Saturday, 28th February 2004 @ 08:58:37 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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A distant call, by serenade
To fall in love, through cascade
Eternal coil, so deep within
Reflection true loves only twin
Transparent mirrors, a crystal dream
Reflective of opaque moonbeams
A starlight web, angel eyes
Silent thoughts in heavens skies
A gentle ripple, in fluid motion
Start as thought, into emotion
A feeling of connective bliss
When staring into the abyss
Within a prism a spectrum pure
Upon glass shards the light demure
We dance upon the clouds refine
A reflection of your love divine.
Copyright ©
forever_lonely
... [
2004-02-28 08:58:37]
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Re: Prism of Reflection
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by Wachumiri on
Saturday, 28th February 2004 @ 09:36:09 AM AEST
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Your poetry is... awesome... May Katharine keep you always in her heart. Keep hers well.
Take care.
David |
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Re: Prism of Reflection
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 28th February 2004 @ 11:09:53 AM AEST
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| luke this is beautiful, peaceful, romantic, ...the road you walk on with her is paved in gold, may it never end, hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Prism of Reflection
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 28th February 2004 @ 04:03:39 PM AEST
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That's the most romantic piece i've ever seen from you, Luke. One has to wonder where you get these ideas from. Solid gold, written with an undeniable grace.
Truly,
-V.S. |
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Re: Prism of Reflection
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by DreamWeaver on
Saturday, 28th February 2004 @ 05:05:59 PM AEST
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| Beautiful words, straight from the heart ... may your life with Katharine be filled with happiness ... Jan |
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Re: Prism of Reflection
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by Rakerman1999 on
Saturday, 28th February 2004 @ 08:44:36 PM AEST
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Yours is the pen of a true poet my friend.
Outstanding romatic write
very well done as always :o)
Larry
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Re: Prism of Reflection
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by arden on
Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 11:53:35 AM AEST
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Wow. i love this.. i can explain how good this is. wow lol it was soooo beautiful loved it!
Arden |
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Re: Prism of Reflection
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by fallen_eyes on
Tuesday, 2nd March 2004 @ 07:48:34 PM AEST
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u really do write the best peotry, its so easy to see why everyone rates u with a 5. ur talent is truely amazing.
love t xxx |
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