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Religious Suicide
Contributed by
stalkee
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Saturday, 28th February 2004 @ 02:04:07 AM in AEST
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"'Father, why have You forsaken me?'"
Are the words you cried out tonight
As you felt the tears roll down your cheeks
While the rain was pouring,
and all the thunder was crashing
You had always been a religious kid
Always prayed your prayers at night
Praying for peace to be with you
But it was never with you...
You've always been the restless type
Turmoil...so much inner turmoil
There's secret pain you've never let show
Secret pain...that only God knows
But wouldn't ever, ever, be healed
And tonight...you finally lost it
You took a stand and you yelled
You cried out denying the God you once said existed
You cried out denying what you once so firmly believed
And now I can't help but cry for you friend,
as you've gone into a religious suicide
Copyright ©
stalkee
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2004-02-28 02:04:07]
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Re: Religious Suicide
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by blueheart on
Saturday, 28th February 2004 @ 02:06:20 AM AEST
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| Great poem, I really related to every word. |
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Re: Religious Suicide
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by venkat on
Saturday, 28th February 2004 @ 04:36:53 AM AEST
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| Really a very good poem..not even a line needs any change..venkat |
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Re: Religious Suicide
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by Lionel on
Saturday, 28th February 2004 @ 11:46:05 AM AEST
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Well, all pain and sorrow came by way of transgression. The garden of Eden had none of it, til Adam and Eve sinned. So, no one, but Christ, has a right to say, God has forsaken them - for all have sinned. Also, "trying" isn't good enough because God demands perfect obedience. That's why it took the sacrifice of the perfect Son of God to set things right for the redeamed. God Bless.
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