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In One Night
Contributed by
Elf
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Saturday, 28th February 2004 @ 01:11:31 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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In one night,
It all fell apart.
All I had worked for,
all I had loved.
In a single night,
It was ripped from me.
With no regard to
how I might hurt.
In one night,
They tore me from you.
With spite shining
in their cold eyes.
In a single night,
They destroyed it all.
My life and my love;
all of it gone.
In one night,
They demolished
what was left
of my spirit.
In a single night,
they killed me.
That night,
they killed you as well.
Copyright ©
Elf
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2004-02-28 01:11:31]
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Re: In One Night
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by lil_angel on
Saturday, 28th February 2004 @ 01:23:37 AM AEST
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| Wow....well done! |
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Re: In One Night
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by Elf on
Saturday, 28th February 2004 @ 08:48:35 PM AEST
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when the one I love was ripped from my arms. *They thought they fixed the "problem". What they dont understand is you can't "fix" love.*
-*Valen*- |
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Re: In One Night
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by Wachumiri on
Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 07:54:43 PM AEST
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May Love come back to you. Keep hope alive.
Take care.
David |
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