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Something's Happening
Contributed by
faithmairee
on
Friday, 27th February 2004 @ 10:03:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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something's happening
between us and it's been
going on a long time
dare we call it love
or do we lose something
in the telling
something is going
on between us and
it is good but
it's not pure
i can feel it in
the air as you ask me
for my hand
something's happening
between us as you
tighten your embrace
so dance with me and
be my man until
the music stops and
my husband asks
for me again
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faithmairee
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2004-02-27 22:03:41]
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Re: Something's Happening
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by lil_angel on
Friday, 27th February 2004 @ 11:36:15 PM AEST
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| This is a great write! You have a great talent! |
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Re: Something's Happening
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by JPMcMillan on
Friday, 27th February 2004 @ 11:46:11 PM AEST
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Not quite sure who the love is in this poem. Maybe a dog, cat, child, yourself, or the "perfect love" perhaps. Either way, it's a great poem!
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Re: Something's Happening
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by PumpkinPie on
Sunday, 14th March 2004 @ 02:08:41 AM AEST
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Nicely done, the ending threw me off guard !Didn't expect that verse coming...Anyways,great write
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