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I Fell Hard
Contributed by
jaeann
on
Friday, 27th February 2004 @ 10:02:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I fell hard so very long ago
not the intention
just the direction
who knew of the future blows.
I fell hard for you on those long nights
a flirtatious little girl
setting out in her adult world
oblivious to the halting sights.
I fell hard watching you drive me home
planned the night so well
tasted the good side of hell
never regretting my sinful roam.
I fell hard as you showed me what love is
a damsel rescued
you let fate bless you
and held me as I ceased being his.
I fell so hard to be with you
a child lost
the vows all crossed
steadied as the sins accrued.
I fell hard to hang on to us
a damaged soul
death to a spirited foal
watched the withering embers of trust.
I fell hard to be right here
your truest faith
a place to call safe
love of a lifetime so clear.
I fell hard for you today
remembering all the times
all at once trying and sublime
you've made me forget the running to stay.
Copyright ©
jaeann
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2004-02-27 22:02:06]
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Re: I Fell Hard
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by lil_angel on
Friday, 27th February 2004 @ 11:34:46 PM AEST
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Re: I Fell Hard
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by Ilhar on
Saturday, 28th February 2004 @ 08:18:25 AM AEST
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amazing write
Shari |
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Re: I Fell Hard
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by Rakerman1999 on
Sunday, 29th February 2004 @ 11:28:15 AM AEST
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Excellent poetry my friend.....beautifully written :o)
Very well done
Roses
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Re: I Fell Hard
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by lovingcritters on
Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 07:22:31 AM AEST
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AwwwPear Lady........the heart of the young. the first taste of love........falling hard is all we can do! Wanting a permanent home...someone to belong......how I can relate to you!
Beautifully done Jaymee..........so blue, and honest, and true!
Wonderful
love you
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