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Heather
Contributed by
doug
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Friday, 27th February 2004 @ 09:25:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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like the fires of hell i burn for you
searing desire unrestrained
at night i toss and turn for you
my tortured mind engulfed in flames
i drink the passion from your lips
on a hot night of dripping sin
you touch me with your fingertips
my heart is pounding 'neath your hand
i cannot think, i lose control
i am enchanted by your flesh
to satan i would sell my soul
to feel your breath against my neck
and as the feverish night decends
our bodies sweating in the heat
when we've committed every sin
only then will i find peace
Copyright ©
doug
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2004-02-27 21:25:09]
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Re: Heather
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by Kie on
Friday, 27th February 2004 @ 09:46:33 PM AEST
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A strong, expressive write.
*Fans self*
Thoughts are now rampant in my mind! (LOL)
Kie |
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Re: Heather
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by Cynthia on
Saturday, 28th February 2004 @ 01:16:07 AM AEST
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| WOW! What a passionate write. Thanx for your comments on my pieces. I will keep in touch on the news. *S* Cynthia |
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Re: Heather
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by NirvanaLotus on
Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 05:10:02 PM AEST
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| *cat calls* wonderful poem! gotta say, best romance poem on this site i've found yet |
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