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Bonsai Tree on my Window Sill
Contributed by
Whisper
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Friday, 27th February 2004 @ 07:48:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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Bonsai Tree on my Window Sill
Do things matter when you're a Bonsai Tree?
Potted and watered, cared for and tended.
I wondered as I watch the sun through my window.See how its small trunk twists while reaching for the sun In the mornings, until the last rays of the evening Sun.
Don't I wish ,I could have that Peace and tranquill it receives .
As the beams kisses its branches and leaves it safe and warm, growing free.
Leaving me to feel at times ,wishing I were that tree.
Whisper
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2004-02-27 19:48:25]
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Re: Bonsai Tree on my Window Sill
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by lil_angel on
Friday, 27th February 2004 @ 09:45:18 PM AEST
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| This is an excellent peice of work! |
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Re: Bonsai Tree on my Window Sill
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by Lionel on
Saturday, 28th February 2004 @ 10:38:37 AM AEST
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You can have that peace and tranquility. It comes by being thankful for your blessings that are unearned by you . And thankful for the mercy of God that prevents us from getting what we've earned, by sin. God Bless
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Re: Bonsai Tree on my Window Sill
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by Lionel on
Saturday, 28th February 2004 @ 10:45:33 AM AEST
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PS. I got so busy preaching to you - I forgot to tell you: I liked the poem. It shows contemplative thought and great ability putting that thought into words.
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Re: Bonsai Tree on my Window Sill
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 28th February 2004 @ 09:11:05 PM AEST
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| very nice and peaceful, they do radiate a mellow quality, dont they? hugs n' love nessa |
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