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Lost
Contributed by
bear14
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Friday, 27th February 2004 @ 07:22:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I feel like I’ve lost a piece of me,
That was never really there.
I lost my best friend
When I found out he didn’t really care.
I feel like I’ve been violated,
Mentally…and physically too.
I had given you a part of me,
That didn’t mean anything to you.
I opened up my heart,
And spilled out my feelings to you,
I thought you’d always be there
But if I only knew…
All you wanted was to get some,
I was a number added to your list,
And when I see you next,
Your face will meet my fist!
I thought you really cared about me,
I wasn’t just another girl,
But I was wrong about you,
And you make me want to hurl!
I thought you were my best friend
And you had feelings for me,
If I’d have known that you didn’t,
I’d have never let it be.
You made me hurt the one I love,
And I can never take that back,
But I still have a heart,
And a heart is what you lack.
I feel like I’ve lost a piece of me,
That was never really there.
I thought you were my best friend
But really, you don’t care.
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bear14
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2004-02-27 19:22:25]
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Re: Lost
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by neglected1 on
Friday, 27th February 2004 @ 07:33:34 PM AEST
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very well writen about love and its hardest outcomes.. dont let anyone treat you that way and take advantage of you .. you deserve much better then just another pig headed guy... (no not all guys are like this)... you will find your one and for then your heart will grow strong.. your love will blossom and burst jus like a new and young flower...
keep up the good work
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Re: Lost
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by lil_angel on
Friday, 27th February 2004 @ 09:39:35 PM AEST
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| Wow this is really good! Hope things get better |
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Re: Lost
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by mercedes on
Saturday, 28th February 2004 @ 11:08:32 AM AEST
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| Great write. You express yourself so well. Welcome to the site. |
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