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Nothing here to see!!
Contributed by
neglected1
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Friday, 27th February 2004 @ 07:21:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Nothing here to see...
I perceive the light at the end
But every time i take a step
It gets dim
Walking around with brute forces
Eyes look askance for a sense of direction
Retraction of blood felt in this so called life
Tense muscles faded to ease
Jabbing knives in this flesh of mine
Undergoing so much pain
Glance of sight of my enemy's
Everyday is a struggle
Looking for that one spec of bliss
Lost my will to win
This grin turns into what enforces vice
Making a gleam of suicidal ness
Run, quick nothing here to see
Trying to restrain my head from staying erect
Chin fastened to my chest
Eyes gazing downward in the sense of invasion
This expression will corrupt you
Color stained with grime and emotions
Cuts and bruises suspend from this
Nowhere close to this livelihood in the far side
Looking at my skin thinking this is too much of a bad dream
Bubbling visions encircling in my inner self
Once a name now distorted to nothing
I feel like i can barely breathe
Nevertheless take a breath
Muscles confined making it hard to arise
Crawling around like some unwanted thing
Still all the pain calls my name
Cuts burning thinking I'm in hell
I'm in a place that exists beyond
A place that's seldom seen
Even the wickedest souls that burned have never seen
Just some time till my legs collapse
So just run, quick there's nothing here to see
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2004-02-27 19:21:30]
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Re: Nothing here to see!!
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 27th February 2004 @ 07:30:36 PM AEST
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this is good! very visual.
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Re: Nothing here to see!!
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by ShadowDaughter on
Friday, 27th February 2004 @ 08:05:51 PM AEST
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Nice job. I like this . . . great imagery, you've painted a very vivid picture here that's a pleasure to read. And I like how the last line is kinda like what policemen say at a crime scene, "move along, nothing to see here . . . " and such.
Anyhow, a very laudable work, moving on now to see what else you've done . . .
regards,
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