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Poem for my Father
Contributed by
aboutdesouffle
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Friday, 27th February 2004 @ 04:00:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
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As I sit here with soggy hair
My mind is cast back to memories of
Days long gone.
I would sit, in pink dressing gown
On the floor by the living room door
And you would position yourself on
The step
You used the old red hairdryer
It would make queer noises
And blow hot and cold
In this fashion, you dried my
Long gold hair
My hair so no longer
Long or golden
And i don't need your help to dry it anymore
But something inside me wishes I did
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aboutdesouffle
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2004-02-27 16:00:42]
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Re: Poem for my Father
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by Ruby1987 on
Friday, 27th February 2004 @ 05:02:06 PM AEST
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that is so sweet. i totally understand that growing up and time changes everything. your poem really hit me in the heart that if i had a father who cared i would have my own special memories about him. Your poem has inspired me to write now.
great poem
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Re: Poem for my Father
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by fallensilence on
Friday, 27th February 2004 @ 05:11:38 PM AEST
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| very good imagry. our memories are the most precious things that well ever have. this poem really touched me. -david |
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Re: Poem for my Father
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 27th February 2004 @ 06:18:22 PM AEST
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My father died 5 years ago the memories just flooded back
thank you,
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Re: Poem for my Father
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Friday, 27th February 2004 @ 09:33:36 PM AEST
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It's been 12 years for me...this did what a poem is supposed to do.... Good write....
Hugs....
Jenni |
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