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A Beautiful Lady
Contributed by
WorthlesSanity666
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Friday, 27th February 2004 @ 02:38:40 PM in AEST
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Death beckons and whispers
quietly in my ear.
Her sweet flowing voice calls softly,
telling me that if I follow her,
the pain will not.
It will leave.
She stands before me,
and hands me a blade.
I know what to do with it.
I slit each wrist.
My very essence
flows from the cuts.
It spills on the floor,
mixing with the dirt,
like it had mixed with my soul.
My blood was poisoned by it.
As I had poisoned
others’ lives.
I go to step towards her,
but she pulls away.
I slit once more,
she pulls away still.
Her beautiful eyes stare into mine,
they shed a single tear.
She turns & disappears.
I sink to the floor.
I weep uncontrollably with despair.
I can never do anything right,
I can’t even die correctly.
Even death did not want me,
no one ever does.
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Re: A Beautiful Lady
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by WorthlesSanity666 on
Friday, 27th February 2004 @ 02:40:47 PM AEST
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| Sorry, got impatient with the submit button. lol |
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Re: A Beautiful Lady
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by Quilted_rag_doll on
Friday, 27th February 2004 @ 07:11:43 PM AEST
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nice. i love the way you portray death as a 'beatuiful women' people see death as many things, and that is how you see it. first she invites you to come, die. then once you slit, she backs away rejecting you. leaving you, alone, sad, & and hungery for acceptance from death. good job, nice write.
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Re: A Beautiful Lady
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by TheDerangedCivilian on
Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 12:21:02 PM AEST
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Hey Hey,
This poem is wicked good and it describes very acurately what some people feel like in this world. Good job on describing what so many people should have said before!
ur bff,
Sarah (TheDerangedCivilian) |
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Re: A Beautiful Lady
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by TwEeK on
Wednesday, 17th March 2004 @ 01:07:58 PM AEST
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don't worry things have got to get better
nice poem all the same,
someone in this world wants you, everyone has a perpose in this strange world you just have to find it ! |
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Re: A Beautiful Lady
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by mysticaldancer on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 04:17:02 PM AEST
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| you'll find someone who wants you, you'll also find your purpose. just be patient. things will work out. |
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Re: A Beautiful Lady
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by JacobsKK on
Sunday, 3rd April 2005 @ 08:29:19 PM AEST
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| Oh my gosh this poem is so sad. :( Now i have to go read a happy one, so that my mood is not spoiled. |
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Re: A Beautiful Lady
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by SIMMI on
Wednesday, 14th June 2006 @ 04:18:40 PM AEST
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DATS SAD
I LIKE THA WAY U DESCRIBED DEATH AS A BEAUTIFUL WOMEN
I GET WAT UR SAYIN THOUGH |
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