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Deathly Kisses
Contributed by
WorthlesSanity666
on
Friday, 27th February 2004 @ 01:53:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
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The knife forms
crimson kisses
on my scared skin.
The scars are from other rendezvous,
both bloody and passionate.
I gently apply pressure to the tip of the knife
against my arm.
As I drag it down,
I lay the rest of the blade down.
I increase the force.
Flirting with death,
seduced by temptation.
We continue the hypnotic love making.
Pleasure overwhelming,
as all my problems bleed from the cuts.
Copyright ©
WorthlesSanity666
... [
2004-02-27 13:53:49]
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Re: Deathly Kisses
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by fallensilence on
Friday, 27th February 2004 @ 01:56:34 PM AEST
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| it's intense. i like it. -david |
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Re: Deathly Kisses
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 27th February 2004 @ 02:19:35 PM AEST
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serious stuff! good write.
wildejohnny |
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Re: Deathly Kisses
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by lildrama04 on
Friday, 27th February 2004 @ 03:26:56 PM AEST
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| This poem reminds me from when I used to cut myself when I was in the 9th grade. But other wise you have an amazing talent and you should use it to your own andvantage don't let other people tell you that it is bad if you know that it's good. I love the poem by the way. |
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Re: Deathly Kisses
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by LADYALISHA on
Friday, 27th February 2004 @ 06:05:38 PM AEST
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| very scary |
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Re: Deathly Kisses
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 08:56:25 PM AEST
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| ouch, vivid, hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Deathly Kisses
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by grim6669 on
Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 03:08:33 AM AEST
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| i love it...........i love it...........it's awsome!!!!.......oooooooooo,........hey.....you should like chack out my poems and let me know what you think.......i write kind of the way you do |
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