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To Succeed..Play the Game
Contributed by
norm
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Friday, 27th February 2004 @ 10:44:34 AM in AEST
Topic:
HumorPoetry
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The dog and the cat
and the rat with the bat
went out to play some ball,
The dog took a swing
And he missed the thing,
And slipped in a flimsy call.
"Ball!", he screamed,
And the ref, he dreamed,
That his rip was tightly seamed,
But for all we know
When he bent to throw,
If he upped his head..he'd be 'creamed'.
Now the dog and the cat
and the rat with the bat
decided to choose a side,
It turned out to be
quite possibly
An enigma for genius to ride.
The dog, don't you see,
Wanted no one but me,
And the cat wouldn't play with the rat,
So the game that would start
If they all took their part,
Went to hell, take a seat, think of that.
A story such as this
Has a moral, don't miss,
Many things in this world could get done,
If you would realize,
Your iotacal size,
We could create an earth full of fun.
normword: iotacal=tiny
Copyright ©
norm
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Re: To Succeed..Play the Game
(User Rating: 1 ) by mercedes on
Friday, 27th February 2004 @ 11:19:07 AM AEST (User
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Cute. |
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Re: To Succeed..Play the Game
(User Rating: 1 ) by Stitch on
Friday, 27th February 2004 @ 01:15:35 PM AEST (User
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Can't argue with this fable.
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Re: To Succeed..Play the Game
(User Rating: 1 ) by lovingcritters on
Friday, 27th February 2004 @ 01:15:59 PM AEST (User
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Wyoming cats and rats play better than that!
It's bats they play with you see.......
Bat the Mitten said the cat, the rat said take that, and if wasn't for the bat......the mitten wouldn't be found!
Piles of dung they throw about, and I wish you could see.....the rat and cat once they bat, sometimes sat in the soft one of dung!
The bat flies over head and I wish you could hear what he sung, "The cat and the rat sat in the dung, and now there will be not more fun!
I loved your poem.......norm.....sounds like the Dr. S to me!
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Re: To Succeed..Play the Game
(User Rating: 1 ) by lovingcritters on
Friday, 27th February 2004 @ 01:16:29 PM AEST (User
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Wyoming cats and rats play better than that!
It's bats they play with you see.......
Bat the Mitten said the cat, the rat said take that, and if wasn't for the bat......the mitten wouldn't be found!
Piles of dung they throw about, and I wish you could see.....the rat and cat once they bat, sometimes sat in the soft one of dung!
The bat flies over head and I wish you could hear what he sung, "The cat and the rat sat in the dung, and now there will be not more fun!
I loved your poem.......norm.....sounds like the Dr. S to me!
Funny
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Re: To Succeed..Play the Game
(User Rating: 1 ) by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 28th February 2004 @ 03:38:10 AM AEST (User
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adorable, thank you for the smile:) hugs n' love nessa |
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