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Penticost
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uchendu
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Friday, 27th February 2004 @ 08:45:14 AM in AEST
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Jesus sent the Holy Spirit
to dwell, guide and empower
and to nurture and comfort
and turn our loss to triumph
Lord your servants are listening
we don't want to live by ourselves
Lord we have quietened our minds
so we can from now hear you better
CHORUS
Come o Holy Spirit
to enkindle our hearts
help us bear your witness
by word and by deed
The banquet is about to begin
we humble ourselves before you
help turn our grumblings to praise
as we fight to shine in your works
Holy Spirit set our hearts on fire
with love that comes from Christ
Holy Spirit refresh our dying hearts
so we can all walk along with you
Copyright ©
uchendu
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2004-02-27 08:45:14]
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Re: Penticost
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by uchendu on
Friday, 27th February 2004 @ 08:54:24 AM AEST
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| Thanks you all as you read and criticise my works.. I appreciate every beat of what you all do about what I write. I am happy to be associated with this site... Hei specal thanks to Emy, Shirley, Venkat, Jenni, Lionel, Mick, IJ, Wesley.... my fans are many and I want to say I love you all. You all spur me up... I will always look up to your comments |
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Re: Penticost
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by poetrygodslove on
Friday, 27th February 2004 @ 09:08:03 AM AEST
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| I LOVED IT... GREAT JOB.. I BELIEVE IT.. I HAVE IT ...HEHEHE... SANDY... LETS TALK SOMETIMES... |
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Re: Penticost
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by Lionel on
Friday, 27th February 2004 @ 10:09:57 AM AEST
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| I like what is said, but shouldn't songs rhyme? |
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Re: Penticost
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 27th February 2004 @ 10:24:27 AM AEST
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| Hi Lionel.. thanks for approving what is said.. I believe songs should rhyme! I am in 100% agreement with that. But I simply also agree it MUST not rhyme all the time because rhyming does interfer with the message sometimes, if I can't make not to obstruct my message.. then I do away with it for that time. But sure there will be rhythm. Thank you Lionel... and I await your contribution. |
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Re: Penticost
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by emystar on
Saturday, 28th February 2004 @ 12:45:39 AM AEST
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wow now, each new one amazes me more and more.
Great job!
Very well written and so true.
When it comes to writing we all have our own style or unique things to say. The remarkable thing is it doesn't have to rythmn.
Poetic liscense.
Great job and thanks for the sweet comments u always give to my work.
luv, hugs,
emy |
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Re: Penticost
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by desire on
Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 11:52:26 AM AEST
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| well well my friend nothing less that i expected...this is an amazing song. and what a poweful messag it is..and you are listening becos God is pouring all of this into you for you to share with the world..you are an amazing talent...and i love what you do...slr |
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Re: Penticost
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by Wrybod on
Wednesday, 3rd March 2004 @ 10:53:25 AM AEST
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Uchendu, As I explained before I'm going through something of a crisis of faith at the moment.
Whilst much of your poetry so far, is helping me through, I cannot yet bring myself to join in any celebrations.
Please excuse me from comment on this one for the moment. I want to read a few more while I have a bit of peace and quiet
to give to it this afternoon.
bob |
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