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suicide wishes
Contributed by
crimsondream
on
Friday, 27th February 2004 @ 02:10:49 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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strike me down
let me die
take the light
from my eyes
in the dark
leave me hear
heal my pain
shake my fear
my heads full
thought and lies
kill me now
hear my cries
follow through
any way
ever night
end this day
hurry up
grap the knife
slit my wrist
steal my life
its the wish
of my heart
body and soul
now will part
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2004-02-27 02:10:49]
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Re: suicide wishes
(User Rating: 1 )
by Remy on
Friday, 27th February 2004 @ 02:48:47 AM AEST
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the things we talk ourselves into doing, sheesh... dark this is, reminds me of the romantic/gothic era... what am i saying?!? good writing!
~Remy~ |
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Re: suicide wishes
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by WorthlesSanity666 on
Friday, 27th February 2004 @ 09:37:51 PM AEST
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| Great write. You described the emotions very well. I look forward to seeing more poems by you. Don't give up, ok? |
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