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he is not like you or i
Contributed by
Cancer
on
Friday, 27th February 2004 @ 01:03:18 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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he's got dirt in his mouth
and his eyes are fading death
his fingers are slim slivers of suicide
and everything he says
is something he said before
he's not like you or i
he's not like anything
he'd like to tear it all away
he'd like to finish everything
his words are waves on darkened shores
where bloated bodies come to rot
he walks alone
from here to there
because he doesn't belong
anywhere
he's not like you
he's not like me
he's nowhere that you'll ever be
for his roads are all inside a mind
that sanity has left behind
his teeth are rage
his face is hate
he eats the colors like a Void
to spit rainbows of agony
he's never near, but he's never far
he's closer than you think
his stars are pretty stabwounds
in the back of god and government
he's lost his mind, it's plain to see
and he wants to be your friend
he is not like you or i
he's not like anything
you've known him for years
he's your closest friend
and he's here to kill everything
(he's shaking with a rage
that you can't comprehend
and his fingers are falling like rain
he's coming apart
yet growing stronger still
growing quite fat from the pain
everything you Never knew
is about to die in front of you
and all you can do is watch...)
Copyright ©
Cancer
... [
2004-02-27 01:03:18]
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Re: he is not like you or i
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by arden on
Friday, 27th February 2004 @ 01:16:54 AM AEST
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that was.. wow! bloody awesome. so good. good write.
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Re: he is not like you or i
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by MoonlitAngel on
Friday, 27th February 2004 @ 01:33:39 AM AEST
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You never fail to creep me out. If I ever go hopelessly paranoid, I'm blaming it on you. Awesome piece, love the end!!!
~ Moonlit |
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Re: he is not like you or i
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by WorthlesSanity666 on
Friday, 27th February 2004 @ 12:35:53 PM AEST
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WOW. That was an amazing poem. I especially loved all the metaphors you used. It painted an amazingly detailed picture in my head. Surprizingly, I could Identify... hmmm...
Good poem! |
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Re: he is not like you or i
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by jaeann on
Friday, 27th February 2004 @ 09:23:23 PM AEST
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| so very dark.........i like......... |
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