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Revenge
Contributed by
srugglingyoungster
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Thursday, 26th February 2004 @ 09:59:56 PM in AEST
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Revenge
Roses are the color of the
blood covering my hands.
Black is the color of my heart,
the evil that it possess.
Blue is the color of my icy eyes
as i look down upon you,
my knife in hand.
Forbidden by the light,
i've lived my whole life in darkness,
in the basement you first kept me in.
And now that im not there anymore,
ill tell you where i am!
Im standing over your dead body,
looking at my blood-stained hands.
Copyright ©
srugglingyoungster
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2004-02-26 21:59:56]
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Re: Revenge
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by stolen-tears on
Thursday, 26th February 2004 @ 10:14:14 PM AEST
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WOW....... I love it!
U got it girl or guy lol.
peace |
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Re: Revenge
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by bobotheclown on
Thursday, 26th February 2004 @ 11:59:38 PM AEST
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*strokes the poem gently* I loved this hate-filled, blood-soaked rant. It was amazing I loved it. Keep up the good work... I must go read it again.
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Re: Revenge
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by Saitou-sama on
Friday, 27th February 2004 @ 12:11:29 AM AEST
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| Ooh, this sent tingles down my spine. Good job. |
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Re: Revenge
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by xoblondiebabix3 on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 08:10:03 PM AEST
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good poem but revenge like that isnt the way to deal sometimes because theres such a thing as forgiveness.. but good job anyways
*XoXoXoXo* |
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